Sales Copy can help you earn money. But you also must recognize when you are being sold, to make a less biased purchasing decision.
This article is mainly for the last reason. To show you how not to be duped, I will give you some sales copy. From an undisclosed site:
Learn the ONLY steps you’ll need to…
This is attractive because you will not have to spent time or money anywhere else to get it. But has this person searched the globe to know these are the only steps? No.
Get 3 proven tips for finding…
This is the BE SPECIFIC tactic. You have to say 3, and even if there are no three, you have to make up 3 because it is more specific.
Why does this work? There is so much junk on the Internet, people scan instinctively for specifics. The word Proven is a buzzword. So this is a combination of two dirty tactics.
Go “behind the scenes” for my proven strategy…
This is the SECRECY tactic. If there is mystery, especially if you are given exclusive access to that mystery, it attracts. However, if everyone can go behind the scenes, it’s not a secret, is it?
Discover the #1 thing to avoid…
Another curiosity builder. You are not told what it is until you sign up. But it’s just a builder, nothing else!
To make the builder even more powerful FEAR is used. Now you are thinking, what is the one thing I am doing wrong? Even if you’re not doing it!
Start building your qualified email list BEFORE you launch
Here is the TIME SAVING tactic. WOW you think, this can save me a lot of time, I can get started before I even think!
Easy hints (and real-life examples)… Step-by-step instructions to…
If it’s easy it’s great. This is another reason to buy.
…that really sells — and keeps selling
We all love something that will do all the work for us while we relax on the beach. But how true is this in real life?
Turn Casual Fans Into Paying Customers
This is what we want, what we dream. But for most people it will remain a dream until they start learning to stop being sold to, and actually start doing some work!
Spaces will fill up fast
Here is the FEAR OF LOSS tactic and the EVERYONE IS DOING IT tactic rolled into one, used everywhere. I can guarantee you, there will always be room left!
If you read too much of this type of low and dirty sales copy you will almost get sick. I have to trawl my way through this stuff and it can almost be mesmerizing if you do not know how to recognize the special bits:
The Headline
You will recognize this because every first letter in the headline will be capitalized.
But this will be nothing to do with the product. It will be what the product does for you – makes you happier, or richer etc.
From the headline, you will not even know what the product is. Your next move is to do a visual scan of the page to the bottom.
The Introduction
There may be a sub-headline or it goes straight into it. But it does not actually go straight into it at all.
You often get predictions here of what your life is like, and how you want it to change, dotted with curiosity builders everywhere to keep you hooked.
You learn nothing at all, but you get some life story to get you emotionally involved.
This is actually to confuse the reader, because it is not what he expects, and with this information overload you are ready to accept anything.
It is just down and dirty hypnotism.
The Testimonials
Here you see the story of a third party, because this is subconsciously more believable. But here it will again perhaps not even mention what the thing does. It will only say how happy the person is, or how their life was changed etc.
The Problems
After predicting what your life is like, you’re almost saying, Hey that’s me. Now your ready to hear about the problems that you’re facing. And while reading this, you assume the thing will solve all these problems, whatever it is.
The Features
So now, the part we’ve all been waiting for. Can it do what I want it to do? By now you are emotionally attached to the maker of this page who put so much time and effort to write this emotional story and made his or her heart bare to you. They feel like your friend, someone you can trust.
The Bonuses
As if that is not enough, here you get even more stuff. You get the VALUE of these bonuses thrown in your face and then realize that these are coming to you free if you get this now.
The (Fake) Price
Before getting the price, you will be told the price of similar products (that are much better than this trash). You will get a comparison of this with other products which will show you how much better this one is.
Then you are given a price. Even though it is much lower than comparison products, this is still only the fake high price.
Guarantee
If you are not satisfied then you will get your money back. Often you will see here a certificate on the screen which is supposed to be some sort of quality seal of this product.
Summary
As if you don’t know already you are told what the features mean. You are given benefits – richer, faster, happier, mixed with a few more ‘testimonies’ dashed here and there.
Then you are told what the bonuses really mean. They are listed again but this time with how they will make you happy.
The idea of making it long is that there will be something in there that rings true.
The Special (real) Price
Now you are given the special discount price today, which is actually all it’s worth. You have every reason now to click on the buy now button which appears around about here on the page, next to the silly crossed out money 100 27 dollars.
Fear of Loss
Here you might learn what you will miss if you don’t buy. This tactic is used on 99% of all copy.
Mugshot
If you haven’t already seen their mug at the top, Here you see their face (again) and a signature, to be really personal. But hey, if you think it’s over, it’s not.
The PS.
A study has shown that people scan through the page visually until they get to the bottom and read what’s there before they actually read the page. This is why there is a PS. at the bottom of each sales copy page, and often some more testimonials.
Reasons To Buy
In a short point form list, you now get the reasons to buy. Not the features mind you, but the result it will give you – happiness, time-saving, all emotional. Here are a few:
Sell while you sleep
It’s FREE to get started
You’ll save money
Round about this point, you will also have another buy now button. Right at the buy now button you will see a caption Try the entire system FREE for 14 days and then pay x per day.
Pep Talk
Here you will find a final blurb about how it’s “even BETTER than risk free”
You pay nothing
You get x dollars (in bonuses)
And then something which makes you think the person is doing it specially for you because he cares for you.
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There are variations of this Sales Junk trolling around the Internet, but they generally follow the same pattern:
One thing common to them all is that they have no date on them. Therefore you don’t know whether you are looking at a page written yesterday or 10 years ago. If there is a date, it will probably be set to today automatically or to a recent date.
The Long Sales letter (what I just described) Unless you haven’t already noticed, the page is as long as about 100 yards until you reach the bottom. This disorientation is a part of making your brain shut down, so that you will just get out your credit card and buy.
The Video Sales letter This time someone tells it to you on a video with sharp clean graphics. These are very similar to the long sales letter in terms of actual content, and often it is combined with a long sales letter below the video.
The Squeeze Page. With razor sharp graphics you soon see the email box where you can’t resist putting in your email. The creator of the page aims for about 15% of visitors of that page to enter their email in.
There are no links to other pages of course so once you’re on the page, there is no such thing as browsing.
Then of course is that obnoxious second pop up which pulls you back if you try to exit the page “Leaving so soon?” offering you a further reduction or incentive.
Armed
Get what you have to, but don’t buy any ridiculous junk digital products on the Internet which may be 10 years old. Now you are armed to face the world of Sales Copy.